Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Promise to Never Forget

Author Notes: This is a journal entry about summer time that I decided to write.

We're running across the sand, sand kicking up, plastering to the back of our calves. The ball passing from player to player, bouncing and skipping from here to there. We're laughing and jumping and tackling each other, so carefree and young. We think of nothing but this moment in time as the sun sets across the lake and the trees cast deep shadows over the orange lighting. We're daring this day to end, not wanting it to because when things are like this, life seems perfect and everything seems to be connected to perfection with no worries of breaking apart. We keep playing until the ball blends into the darkness surrounding us and we all sigh in defeat once again. We gather around the bonfire and recollect our days together and laugh and just enjoy these remarkable memories slowly, not wanting to forget because one day we will all stop coming to this place that made our childhood so memorable and meaningful. Meeting everyone here will change us into what we'll be later, in the far future and we will come back to these memories and thank them for all they've given us. These friends will seperate and some will forget what they had together here and the importance of this place and the affect it has on the soul. This place, this time, these people will hopefully never wander from my mind, and I beg it not to, because I want them with me forever so I can go back and relish in their caressing beauty.

6 comments:

  1. This is really meaningful. I thought you described the scene really well!

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  2. That was good but you kept changing from happy to sad so it was a little confusing

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  3. That was really refreshing. It reminds me of going to the beach for a family reunion. It was really well thought out and written. Good Job:)

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  4. I think that this piece is very beautiful. It reminds people to stop and think about their life what they are doing, and how everyone struggles to want to remember their childhood. This was a wonderful piece, and as Natalie said, refreshing.

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  5. I thought this was very poetic and very good! i loved the concept of this, but if you added a few commas and puncuation it would make this peice flow even better. good job!

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  6. I love this! it's soo beautiful, and meaningful. your very decriptive in your writting, and i like that a lot. good job! this is amazing

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